Monday, 31 August 2020

Persuade Me Karlee

This is what we did today we had too write about this

7 comments:

  1. Kia ora. My name is Kyra and I attend Te Hapara School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
    I really liked the way you added detail into your work . This reminds me ofthe day I spent time with my mum.

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  2. kia ora. My name is Aromahana and I attend Te hapara School in Gisborne, i really liked When You added the background .This reminds me of when i make a google slide with herman.Next time you could put more detail into the background.

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  3. Kia ora. My name is Cindy and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
    I really liked the mum photo.This reminds me of my mum.Next time you could write why your mum is the best mum .Ka rawe! Cindy

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  4. hi my name is Kejon and i really liked how you added detail and i like when
    you said do you have a mum because i have the best mum in the world what is your mum like.Kia ora Kejon.

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  6. Kia ora, It’s me Kyana. I like how you added lots of detail. This reminds me of the writing my class did this morning. How long did it take you to write this? Good job, Karlee!

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  7. Kia ora. My name is Summer and I attend Te Hapara School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I like the way you added good detail .This reminds me of when I went with my mum to Australia.Next time you could make the page smaller.Ka rawe! Summer

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